Focus Group

This is our focus group which analysed the poster that Tom Williams made.  They responded quite positive with quite a lot of good points and some bad points which he then changed. A focus group was a very good way of finding out things that needed changing. We should of had a group of boys perform a focus group to give us a fair opinion. The reason we chose girls is because these are our target audience. The main points that Olivia and I felt was the main criticism was that the writing 'Welcome To Marygreen Manor' was too small which we then handed to Tom so he could then change it in order to make the writing easier to read.